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-Winter's Rose- by Aro-chan -Winter's Rose- by Aro-chan
A rose lies bleeding on the snow. This is the last rose of summer, the one that was promised the most beautiful future, it had but to be patient....

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Rose on a Pillow by =rockgem

Photoshop effects, text editing and poetry done by me.

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:iconpieces-of-my-heart:
Pieces-Of-My-Heart Featured By Owner May 25, 2010
So beautifully sad :clap:
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner May 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you =)
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ArtSoul777 Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
Sadly beautiful yet even a winter's rose provides a blossom of beauty to weary souls . . . I adored your poem! :love:
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner May 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
aww thank you =)
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:iconumerr2000:
umerr2000 Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
woah niceely written!
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks much
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:iconumerr2000:
umerr2000 Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yoru welcome =D
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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:iconumerr2000:
umerr2000 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
=D
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:iconnotesandcrayons:
NotesAndCrayons Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010   Writer
i :heart: this. it's breath-taking and heart-breaking!
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't say much about poetry, but the last line is quite moving :( love the template, too.
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you =)
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love literature about roses. they are my favorite flower, for very personal reasons. Excellent work! I especially love the phrasing of your words in conjunction with the photo.

Also, you should look into :iconjust-imagine-it:. It's a group for visual literature pieces just like this! ^.^ You should consider joining us.
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I've been searching for groups to join, definitly will join that ^.^ Thanks for liking my poem =)All my peices are along these lines
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:iconthemaideninblack:
TheMaidenInBlack Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
As always, you use a lot of vocabulary. :) I like this.

Did you try using GIMP?
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I tried, but it wouldn't download. I'm thinking of going through the trouble of learning adobe.
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:iconthemaideninblack:
TheMaidenInBlack Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
:( that's weird.

Oh, Photoshop isn't difficult at all if you just want it for visual poetry. You open the image, press the T key (Text), select the font, size, colour and position on top and then write it. :shrug:

If you want to do digital art, on the other hand... ;P
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
No, I just have one issue after the other. If this time download works out me, I'll totally make all my work... prettier?
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:iconthemaideninblack:
TheMaidenInBlack Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010
:) I hope it works! I know what you mean.
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GhuneiM Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i love your portrays, your expressions, and the structure of the poetry. very pretty as usual!
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Means alot, thank you.
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:iconfairytales-dreamers:
Fairytales-Dreamers Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
Are you kidding me? You did a great job. This is awsome! :D
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
*blushes* It's still one of my most amateur works...
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Fairytales-Dreamers Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
haha, don't worry about it too much. there were one or two spots that could use little tweaks, like adding a comma, but for the most part, it was really well done, i think. i enjoyed it, anyway.

I've never thought of it like that before, actually. Most people would see a lone rose bloom in winter, and see it as a sign, a mericle. But you look at it rom the flower's perspective, if it had one. It would be really lonely and cold for a flower. I really love the whole idea/concept you had. And even if it didn't flow perfectly, you were able to get your message across, so i consider it well done. :D
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I know, I can be clumsy that way but it can sometimes to be difficult to work with rhyming poetry. I didn't do much editing except cut out a few lines from the original, like

Fragile I lie like a bloodstain on the snow
There would be no spring for this winters rose


Also, poor graphics... I did this on paint =_=
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:iconfairytales-dreamers:
Fairytales-Dreamers Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
haha, its not that bad. Is that your own photography?
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Naah... google
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:iconfairytales-dreamers:
Fairytales-Dreamers Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
ah. ever try photography?
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Sure.... just not the visual art kind.
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