haha, don't worry about it too much. there were one or two spots that could use little tweaks, like adding a comma, but for the most part, it was really well done, i think. i enjoyed it, anyway.
I've never thought of it like that before, actually. Most people would see a lone rose bloom in winter, and see it as a sign, a mericle. But you look at it rom the flower's perspective, if it had one. It would be really lonely and cold for a flower. I really love the whole idea/concept you had. And even if it didn't flow perfectly, you were able to get your message across, so i consider it well done.