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One day, a fly got caught in a spider's web. As the spider came down to wrap its prey in web, the fly did some quick thinking.

"What a beautiful web you have made" commented the fly. "The design is simply breathtaking".

"Thank you" replied the spider, rather flattered. But she began to start spinning anyway.

"Your eyes!" cried the fly. "You have the most beautiful eyes of any creature I have ever seen. So red and shiny-"

The spider smiled, but did not stop in her spinning.

"You are so beautiful, you are fit to be queen" said the fly, now rather panicky.

"In fact," he continued, "my great-great-great grandmother has the most beautiful crown, made of real spider silk. It would fit you perfectly."

"A crown?" asked the spider, pausing now.

"Absolutely!" agreed the fly. "You must believe me, it is the most beautiful crown--encrusted with dew drops from a rose and the eyes of a butterfly. None but you are fit to wear it. I could bring it to you, if you would let me go for a moment to get it."

The spider considered this a moment. What was one fly to a crown? So, the spider let the flattering fly go, hoping he would bring her back the crown. Of course, he never came back.

Moral: Flattery is a powerful tool.
Written into dA, entry for Fable Me This hosted by ^fllnthblnk

*sighs*
I'm kind of getting annoyed with these dA contests. You think, just one more contest and then I'll get back to my writing... and then Oi!

This isn't at all what I planned. I was going to re-write "The Ugly Duckling" from the point of view of one of the yellow ducks. Because, as you probably won't know, there's nothing I love more then looking at the something from a different angle.

However, I was watching Drake & Josh, and there's this episode where Drake goes to work at Josh's Cinema and works his charms on the manager. Inspiration FTW!

As far as I know, although I won't pretend I know my fables beyond Aesop.... this fable has not been done before. It is entirely of my own invention, although I believe it will be a matter of common observance that almost anyone can be won with flattery.

And there you have... my Fable! :bow:
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:iconangelichope:
Seriously cool!!:D
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:iconvenry:
Venry Jul 20, 2010  Student General Artist
I like the light tone--well done!
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thannks
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wyldhoney Jun 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I like the way you can feel the fly's increasing panic, and how you can almost hear the click in the spider's head when she changes her mind.
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks =) Appreciated.
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:iconmsklystron:
msklystron May 30, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Love this. The best part is the butterfly eyes. It's a little detail that the clever fly adds to his yarn to make the spider doubt the lie just long enough to pause. The fly is clearly a writer.:D

Fix one little thing: Make the hyphen after the word 'crown' an em-dash by adding a second dash. Then this will be perfect.:)
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan May 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're right! It looks so much better that way. I wouldn't say perfect but I was pleased with the way this came out :blushes:
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:iconmsklystron:
msklystron Jun 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Perfection is over-rated.;)
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:iconaro-chan:
Aro-chan Jun 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:highfive: to that one!
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:iconmsklystron:
msklystron Jun 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:heart:
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